My academic musings.

Tuesday, June 30, 2009

McComiskey

McComiskey, Bruce. Teaching Composition as a Social Process. Logan, Utah: Utah State UP, 2000.


McComiskey reframes process theory in composition by arguing for a 3-part pedagogy which he calls "social-process theory." This theory asks students to attend to the 3 components -- the cycle -- of composing: textual, rhetorical, and discursive. The goal for him is to teach students to intervene in public discourses in productive ways.

Key Terms:
social process: "social process composition pedagogies treat critical writing as rhetorical inquiry and political intervention into the cultural forces that construct our subjectivities" (3).

Cultural production/contextual distribution/critical consumption: (taken from postmodernism and cultural studies); the "cycle of composing" which is the 3 levels of composing (defined above).

"I agree that a balanced approach to the 3 levels of composing leads students to the fullest and most effective understanding of their writing processes" (7).

"I propose a cyclical model of the writing process, one that acocunts for the composing strategies of individual and collaborative writers as well as the socio-discursive lives of texts" (20).

"Invention heuristics based on this cycle encourage students to understand language and culture as socially constructive forces (production) conditioned by contexts (distribution) and negotiated by critical subjectivities (consumption)" (20).

"...I argue that the most fruitful meaning for the 'post' in post process is 'extension,' not 'rejection,' and I offer social-process rhetorical inquiry as a pedagogical method for extending our present view of the composing process into the social world of discourse" (47).

"...it is important for students to learn that their critical knowledge is significant only insofar as it is made public" (132).

"And it is only through the postmodern turn toward pragmatic, public discourse that students can learn these socio-rhetorical strategies. I believe that the development or awakening of 'critical consciousness' alone...is insufficient. It is crucial that students also learn to transform their critical knowledge into communal discourse, audience-centered communication with the intention of influencing cultural practices through persuasive writing" (133).

I have so much to say about this book that I wrote a 2 page argument about it... I won't reproduce it here. But suffice it to say that I have quite a few problems with this text -- mostly because McComiskey's pedagogy is, to put it simply, oppressive and coercive: his values become the value of the composition class, and to me, these values are not at all criticized or examined. To put it another way, teaching students to intervene in public discourses through persuasive writing privileges one kind of writing over another, not to mention that public discourses are inherently problematic (and therefore should be corrected).

Harris

Harris, Joseph. A Teaching Subject: Composition Since 1966. Upper Saddle River: Prentice Hall,
1997.

Harris attempts to offer a view of composition studies since 1966 by a cluster of 5 key terms: growth, voice, process, error, and community. These "keywords" help him to engage in critiques of prevailing views of composition, and to offer his own view that composition is a "teaching subject" (ix).

Key quotations:
"We have yet to find ways not only to have our teaching better informed by theory but to make our theories more responsive to the scene of teaching" (14).

"One way to help such students imagine themselves as intellectuals, then, is to ask them to look closely at how they already go about reading the many various texts they meet from day to day -- both in school and outside of it" (19). (JH's concl. w/ the "gap" between experience and academy).

"First, I want to argue against how the relations between theory and practice are usually imagined -- which is, to put it simply, that the one leads to the other, that first one figures out what the theory is, and then applies it in the classroom" (40).

"Second, I want to argue against the sort of narrative of progress that still informs many histories of composition" (40).

"My aim here instead is to try to get at what it might have meant to teach writing 'as process not product'. For while it seems clear to me that the process movement helped establish composition as a research field, I am not nearly so sure it ever transformed the actual teaching of writing as dramatically as its advocates have claimed" (55).

"It seems to me that a teacher can fairly quickly explain the various aspects of composing, schedule plenty of time in the semester for students to revise and edit their work thoughtfully, and then get on with the main business of the course: to help students articulate, extend, and perhaps rework the positions they take on in their writing" (57) --->Harris's argument.

"To really change the teaching of writing, then, it seems to me that a view of process must go beyond the text to include a sense of the ongoing conversations that texts enter into -- a sense, that is, of how writers draw on, respond to, and rework their own previous writings and those of others" (68).

"Both sides of this argument, in the end, rest their cases on the same suspect generalization: that we and our students belong to different and fairly distinct communities of discourse, that we have 'our' 'academic' dscourse and they have 'their own' 'common'(!) ones...similarly, our teaching will and should always be affected by a host of beliefs and values that are held regardless of our voices as academics" (105).

"...our goals as teachers need not be to initiate our students into the values and practices of some new community, but to offer them the chance to reflect critically on those discourses of home, school, work, the media, and the like -- to which they already belong" (105). ----> Ulmer!

"What I do want is a sort of teaching that aims more to keep the conversation going than to lead it toward a certain end, that tries to set up not a community of agreement but a community of strangers, a public space where students can begin to form their own voices as writers and intellectuals" (116).

I see Harris advocating for Elbow's "believing game" in many places, esp. 114-115. I like this as it helps me see the connections between the two. It also helps me solidify my reading of Elbow as being concerned with the socially constructed aspects of texts, writing, and processes.

Harris takes up the central debate of theory vs.practice in a way that places students first. He clearly advocates for a model of informed practice, that theory and practice should meld together in the classroom; perhaps that there's no real distinction between the two. I especially like the idea that Harris asks us to rethink teaching as a practice of critical reflection and engagement through this reflection; that is, students don't need to learn "academic discourse" as an abstract monolith but rather engage the discourse through their own communities, values, and discourses.

Monday, June 29, 2009

James Berlin

Berlin's Rhetoric and Reality examines writing instruction in American Colleges from 1900-1985. Berlin offers a 3-part taxonomy to understand the trends of rhetoric and composition: objective, subjective, and transactional. For Berlin, we need to think about the connection between rhetoric (which he argues works better defined as rhetorics) and the social contexts in which a rhetoric emerges.

Key terms/Quotations:

Rhetoric = rhetorics, since rhetoric is diverse, historic, contingent. Rhetoric = "production of discourse" (xi).

Objective rhetoric: reality and truth within external (material world); writers record reality exactly as it happened to transfer unfettered to the reader. "current traditional" rhetoric/modes

Subjective rhetoric: Truth located within individual and only accessible to him or her; can't be transmitted. In the writing class, writing can't be taught, but the teacher provides the environment for the student to find her truth. Classroom practice consists of metaphor, journals, and peer groups.

Transactional rhetoric: Truth emerges from interaction between individual and the world.
3 forms: classical, cognitive, and epistemic
Truth is uncertain; concerned with "total range of human behavior" (15).
New knowledge is important; this new knowledge emerges from interactions
language constitutes all reality and experience.


Mike Rose's Lives on the Boundary

I loved re-reading Mike Rose's Lives on the Boundary. Rose departs from "scholarly tradition" to recount his experiences as a struggling student in South LA. His aim is to examine the social conditions of teaching/education, as well as to critique the various ways in which the educational system -- and its arbitrary standards of literacy -- not only stereotypes the students, but has lasting effects on their ability to learn and teachers willingness to teach.

For me, what's most useful about this book is the way in which Rose doesn't explicitly theorize; if he does, it's based strictly on the experiences he has with individual students. This seems an answer to the theory/practice debate, in that it offers a model of theorizing not only based in material reality, but one that doesn't try to abstract the person from the situation. As Rose discusses various curriculums he had, he reveals his approval of academic discourse; that is, he believes in teaching students academic discourse because it will help them get to where they are going. For me, this is useful because it doesn't merely critique academic discourse as oppressive; instead, he understands that the methods by which it is purported and guarded are oppressive. In a word, Rose's book could be summarized as "access": he wants all to be able to access the standard of literacy that we've come to take as basic -- while understanding that there are different models of literacy to take into account.

In terms of the theory/practice debate, then, Rose is surely a practitioner. The self he constructs in the book suggests that he isn't interested in theory, except in how it can help him teach. However, I would argue, too, that what he discusses in the book advocates a blended model of "informed practice," where theory and practice blend so seamlessly into each other that it's impossible to tell which is which.


100th Post and Bruce Horner

Bruce Horner's Terms of Work for Composition: A Materialist Critique takes up a "cultural materialist critique of work" in composition studies, because the issue of work -- variously defined -- plays such a crucial role in composition. Horner thus advocates for a "material social critique" (of writing) that acknowledges, theorizes, and resists context/ labor conditions. Essentially, Horner wants the field to recognize the "materiality" of all the work we do, especially student work, which, in his courses, comprises the main text.

Key quotes:
"Rather than denigrating or praising what passes for intellectual work for its intellectuality, we need to insist on the material social conditions making that work possible and shaping it; we cannot use its 'intellectuality' as a basis for denying its materiality" (9). Crucial point in book; sums it up, I think.

On pp 14-18, Horner characterizes the theory/practice debate under the head "Work in Composition". He divides the field in two categories: those concerned with "professionalization", and those concerned with teaching. One reason for such polarity stems from the marginal status of composition in relation to English studies and in the academy as a whole. Thus, those interested in "professionalizing" adopt theory; they publish in journals, conduct research studies, and essentially "threaten to distance Composition from its material ties to and identification with teaching" (15).

But the practitioners aren't much better. According to Horner, "these faculty define their own knowledge in terms of their experience of what 'works' in the classroom, and pride themselves on their dedication to teaching and their students. In so doing, however, they increase the marginality of their position in the academy and subject themselves to ever more degrading working conditions"(15).
The solution is invariably to adopt a material social critique; however, Horner is cautious to advocate not for a "balance...but intervention at the point of their interrelations" (27). That is, he urges the field to ignore the distinction between theory and practice:

"...in order to address the material conditions of our labor, we must abandon such distinctions, in effect making it our work to articulate the interpenetration of all these as constitutive of our work. This will require initially foregrounding the ways in which contradictions embedded in distinctions between intellectual and non-intellectual labor and the commodification of intellectual labor play out at the site of composition" (29).

"The cultural materialist alternative for which I would argue would insist, instead, not only on the political, strategic nature of specific representations but on the necessity of their being so -- that is, it would insist on both recognizing the inevitably contingent character of representations and understanding one's choice of representation in terms of the specific material contingencies of one's teaching" (35).

"...I would argue for representing students as above all else as workers, working on themselves, Composition, the academy, and the social generally" (35).

"The alternative challenge Composition faces is how teachers and students can confront the ways in which each material act of writing and reading mediates, in the sense of actively re-forming and transforming, and is mediated by social identification, difference, and power, both responding to and reconstructing or revising these" (37).

"Here let me emphasize that it is within such oppositions that the term 'student work,' like the term 'women's work,' appears as an oxymoron, by definition less or other than real work -- than, say, the work of men. And of course, these conceptions are part of a chain, or nest, of binaries derogating teaching, the academic, the feminine, the personal, and so on which distinguish labor from work, feeling from thought, experience from intellect, the personal from the social, composition from academic disciplines, and the academic from the real" (53).

"...compris[ing] all the activities of its provocation, composition, distribution, and reception and the involvement of these with the other: work, in short, as material social practice, where agency meets structure" (66) --- possibly the definition of m-s-p?

"What I am suggesting, however, is that in addition to these curricula, we need to acknowledge as well a curriculum 'hidden' from or ignored or dismissed by the dominant, one that promotes alternative or oppositional interests" (117).

"The composition course identifies academic work as a material social practice. Even in its most debased, skills and drills forms, it takes as its primary focus the materiality of the writing that constitutes the bulk of academic work. In focusing on the materiality of academic 'discourse,' of whatever stripe, it threatens continually to reveal the location of academic disciplinary work in the material realm. That is to say, Composition reveals what most disciplines deny: the contradiction between the apparent stability of their disciplinary subject as an abstract, reified entity, and the necessity for its continual, material reproduction through pedagogy generally and writing in particular" (146).

"The discourse of academic professionalism limits how we think of the work of Composition, defining legitimate work as the acquisition, production, and distribution of print-codified knowledge about writing: the production and reception of scholarly texts. In this discourse, the 'work' associated with such activities as teaching is deemed 'labor,' the implementation of the work of professional knowledge, and thus susceptible to proletarianization" (173). ----> theory/practice

"But as the Amherst tradition and the work of Coles and Bartholomae illustrate, the material practice of tradition -- including writing and writing style -- is not to be so easily divorced from theory or any of its 'components'"( 200).

"This commodified view of scholarship provides a different perspective from which to understand the theory/practice debate. The work of theory, or, better, 'theorizing,' is not typically imagined as material practice but as commodity whose properties reside in the 'theory' itself, understood as existing outside the material realm" (226).

I have quite a bit to say about this book; mostly that I disagree with a lot of the readings of schools/ theories that Horner evinces as evidence (i.e. expressivist pedagogy, the Amherst school, etc). In addition, I believe that the project-- while useful and productive for us and our students -- still imposes a particular set of values on the students that I find problematic. Horner would have it that by taking the students seriously, by considering them workers, we value them and can overcome the marginalization that they and us have encountered. But I can speak from experience that this would not, and does not, work with all students... and not because they're apathetic, either. Finally, I think that this does not effectively theorize the theory/practice debate outside the position of, "well, we need both." In other words, Horner's approach, in accounting for the material social residue of theories and practices, suggests that we can transcend these binaries in favor of something more productive and resistant. But can it? I guess I was expecting much more from this book, since it's been touted to me as "canonical". And what's up with the fact that Horner denigrates the very curriculum he installed at UWM? Anyone?



Saturday, June 20, 2009

More Slacking... and Keywords

I've been on a blogging (but not reading) hiatus, due to teaching and my stint reading AP exams in FL. Now that I have some time, the blogging resumes with a book I read about 3 weeks ago... and have yet to post about.

Since the last post, I've read:
Writing/Teaching Paul Kameen
Kitchen Cooks, Plate Twirlers, and Troubadours ed Diana George
The Making of Knowledge in Composition Stephen North
Sidney Dobrin's book
Balancing Acts eds Anderson, Buley-Meissner, Chappell

Now for the Keywords:

Heilker, Paul, and Peter Vandenberg, eds. Keywords in Composition Studies. Portsmouth, NH: Boynton-Cook. 1996.

This book is a collection of short essays on keywords in composition studies. However, as the editors declare, the essays explore the multiple valences and definitions of each word to resist consensus. In essence, the book tries simultaneously to record and resist meaning.

Instead of talking about important quotations/key terms as is my m.o, I'm going to list the key quotations under the word they describe. I have selected terms which I found most useful for my exams/projects; these selections do not represent the breadth of the book or the overall usefullness of the book in general.

Composing/Writing:
"This idea, that writing is not the transcribing of thought but rather the process of creating insight itself, sets the stage for the next major construction of writing and composing in composition studies, the one epitomized in the 1981 work of Linda Flower and John R. Hayes: writing as thinking, as a recursive cognitive activity, as problem-solving; composing as the goal-directed orchestration of a set of distinctive, hierarchical, highly-embedded thinking processes" (41).

"It should be noted that writing as learning is the strand of meaning from which the often-invoked images of writing as exploration and discovery arise" (41-2).

Essay:
"One thing many of the above have in common is their assumption that the essay-- whether interpreted as an aesthetic of the personal, a search for ontological truths, or a medium for social construction -- remains separate from poetry, fiction, drama, and so on. Others are more critical of such distinctions" (86).

"As we scan different readings (and thus, always, engenderings) of this word and its origins, it would appear that the essay can not signify any bona fide genre. Rather, the term might best be considered an 'open rubric' the intention of which can only be defined locally by the 'rule makers' of specific discourse communities: i.e., the teacher, the test maker, the editor, the publishing company. As paradigm shifts in our technology and culture continue to force us to revamp our definitions of literacy and writing, the debates over the appopriate meanings for the 'essay' will most likely become even more heated and, perhaps to those outside academic communities, increasingly irrelevant" (87).

Invention:
"It has been generally accepted that these 'sets of instructions' are equivalent to what are routinely caled 'heuristic procedures,' what Richard Young, in his 1976 bibliographic essay, refers to as any 'explicit plans for analyzing and searching which focus attention, guide reason, stimulate memory and encourage intuition.' That which is said to qualify as an inventional device or heuristic procedure, however, has been deliberated throughout the history of composition studies" (132).

"While each of [Young's] theories constitute heuristic procedures, their differing forms and functions are the result of differing approaches to the composing process" (133).

(According to LeFevre): "Invention thus 'becomes an act that may involve speaking and writing, that at times involves more than one person; it is furthermore an act initiated by writers and completed by readers, extending over time through a series of transactions and texts" (134; qtd in LeFevre 1).

"Expanded definitions of invention see it 'not just as a method of retrieving what we already know, but as a process that constitutes our inquiry" (134; LeFevre 123).

"Paul Kameen uses the term 'imagination' to describe these forms of 'modern invention' that are strategies 'for the methodical acquisition of new knowledge': classical invention is thus a 'fairly mechanical special case of creative thought that imagination absorbs into its broader systems'" (134; Kameen 85-6).

Young writes: "It is becoming increasingly apparent that as new and significant methods of invention emerge we need to develop a more adequate terminology which distinguishes various arts or methods of invention from the art of invention, that is, the members from the class" (134, Young 17).

Pedagogy: (Karen Fitts)
"Pedagogy -- with no adjective -- became (retrospectively at least) current-traditional pedagogy, then process pedagogy (composed of diverse forms of teaching undergirded by broadly ranging assumptions) and finally critical pedagogy. That pedagogy entered composition studies not routinely linked with an adjective suggests it was then assumed to be self-evident, separable from theory" (168).

"Richard Fulkerson argues that, as a general rule, theory and practice began to be conflated in pedagogy only in the 1980s; before that, it was accepted teacherly practice to discuss the characteristics of good writing without also imagining how writers might write or how teachers might enable writers" (168).

"Woods writes that the discipline-centered see pedagogy as a civilizing influence; it offers values, skills, and precepts to primitive beings, whereas proponents of a student-centered pedagogy perceive themselves as giving voice to (inherently good) humanity" (169).

"Divergent as these perspectives are, they hold in common at least one trait: their localized focus on individual teachers and individual students" (169).

"Freire's primary contribution was in revealing the interactions between education and society, thus elevating pedagogy to its prominent contemporary position as an agent for social change" (169).

Practice/Praxis:
"In composition studies, practice is often joined with theory in a hierarchal binary in which theory informs practice but practice doesn't inform theory" (187).

"Recognizing practice as a mode of inquiry contributes to new understandings of knowledge making" (187).

"A decisive contribution to the contemporary age of politics was Paulo Freire's introduction of praxis to composition studies in the early 1980s. For while practice almost inevitably is set off against theory, praxis erases this polarity through the means of dialectics. Raymond Williams contends that in its modern sense, developed in Hegelian and Marxist thought, 'praxis is practice informed by theory and...less emphatically, theory informed by practice'" (188).

"Praxis thus restores theory and practice to one another..." (188-9).

"In any case, the commitment to greater social and political equity through classroom practices is especially characteristic of feminists, marxists, multiculturalists, and other oppositional pedagogues" (189).

Rhetoric:
"Rhetoric is buffeted by storms of signification coming from two directions. From one direction comes the general public's perception, reinforced by the popular media, of rhetoric as bombast, figurative language designed to cover up either deception or shallow substance" (213).

"From another direction comes the implied meaning, embraced within most academic circles, of rhetoric as the subject matter that gets taught in composition courses" (213).

"For most of this century, rhetoric, supported by a tradition of philosophical/theoretical scholarship, has been invoked to rescue composition from its seemingly anti-intellectual baggage of word-, sentence-, and paragraph-level pedantry" (213).

"The only characteristic these [three] theories share is that their proponents seem to envision their rhetoric as being able either to explain how speakers and writers behave in certain situations or to direct speakers and writers to generate language that has certain, presumably effective, characteristics" (214).



Saturday, June 6, 2009

Shaughnessy

In Errors and Expectations, Mina Shaughnessy offers "a guide to the teacher of basic writing" by suggesting that the "errors" students make do, in fact, have a logic and an explanation. Teachers of basic writing need to be able to understand these errors as part of a process, and help the student determine why he or she is making these errors. Shaughnessy emphasizes process over product, and while she advocates practice with grammar/mechanics, at the same time she places great importance on proofreading as the final stage of writing.
Important Quotes:

For me, what's most useful are the several sections where she discusses -- indirectly -- invention.
But there are some gems about learning and writing, too.

What I liked the most about this book is that Shaughnessy advocates meeting students "where they are;" her approach is definitely a student-centered one where what the students know is brought into contact with what they do not know, or do not know they know.

As I read, I kept being struck by how much Shaughnessy emphasizes the social nature of language and writing. While one might argue that she uncritically presents academic discourse as the ideal for BW students to master (and I would agree with this critique); Shaughnessy does promote reflective practice and place students at the forefront of teaching writing. It's interesting to see how James Berlin has critiqued Shaughnessy for espousing a cognitive (process) approach, which, for him, means that she ignores the socially constructed nature of language/writing. There are, however, several occasions where Shaughnessy directly discusses the social aspects of language.

Aside from the privileging of academic discourse: it would seem that Shaughnessy is a tad prescriptive (though I do believe in prescriptive teaching if it's reflected upon and it works). My major critique: the implicit assumption that the oral discourse students bring with them to the writing classroom is a hindrance. While Shaughnessy takes careful pains to equate BEV, for example, with SWE, oral dialects/discourses show up throughout her book as problematic and a hindrance to the process of learning to write academic discourse.